ROMANS and PERSUASIVE ESSAY
I think the Romans were rude because they need a moral society. They only let wealthy people be taken care of.
Teacher what are 3 things our culture needs to correct?
Cindi: 1 the materialism, 2 the view of disabilities, 3 I think the law of chastity is broken a lot
Teacher: Who is the audience you are writing to?
Cindi: youth of the world
There are many problems with our culture. The problems are: Materialism, view of disabilities, and breaking the law of chastity.
The first problem is the materialism. this is when we have too much focus on getting things. This is a problem because we are so blessed and have more than enough. When you have too much you become self-fish, which makes you unhappy.
The problem with the view of disabilities is thinking we are not smart. People treat us like we are two years old. We are treated like we don't matter. I think that is so sad. The problem is we don't get a good education, then we have no good opportunities.
The third point is we don't live the law of Chastity. we think we know what is right but don't live it. The law of Chastity is the ability to not have sex before marriage. It is about how you think good thoughts. the law of Chastity was given by God. we need to live it so children have a mom and dad. In the end we need to live it so we can be happy.
Here is the way to live: give to others, get the disabled educated, live the law of chastity so there is love.
In the end there still are problems with out culture.
I think the Romans were rude because they need a moral society. They only let wealthy people be taken care of.
Teacher what are 3 things our culture needs to correct?
Cindi: 1 the materialism, 2 the view of disabilities, 3 I think the law of chastity is broken a lot
Teacher: Who is the audience you are writing to?
Cindi: youth of the world
There are many problems with our culture. The problems are: Materialism, view of disabilities, and breaking the law of chastity.
The first problem is the materialism. this is when we have too much focus on getting things. This is a problem because we are so blessed and have more than enough. When you have too much you become self-fish, which makes you unhappy.
The problem with the view of disabilities is thinking we are not smart. People treat us like we are two years old. We are treated like we don't matter. I think that is so sad. The problem is we don't get a good education, then we have no good opportunities.
The third point is we don't live the law of Chastity. we think we know what is right but don't live it. The law of Chastity is the ability to not have sex before marriage. It is about how you think good thoughts. the law of Chastity was given by God. we need to live it so children have a mom and dad. In the end we need to live it so we can be happy.
Here is the way to live: give to others, get the disabled educated, live the law of chastity so there is love.
In the end there still are problems with out culture.